The way she laughs excites me, the way she ponders is seductive. Like the tide, i'm drifting towards her, and like the shore I hope she soaks me in.
She ponders
When the Soul Cried Out for Meaning
The way she laughs excites me, the way she ponders is seductive. Like the tide, i'm drifting towards her, and like the shore I hope she soaks me in.
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Eloquent. This poem, if I were to receive it from a man, would likely win me over! ❤
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Thankyou😊 and I’m sure youve recieved many a poem
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I love this. The metaphor is a vivid image!
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A very large poem… in a very small package…
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Thank you, I guess they dont all have to be big to carry meaning.
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Well on re-reading the poem it is obvious you are a man writing about a woman…somehow tho’ your wording sounded so poignant…..poetry crosses all boundaries like music 😉
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Very eloquent poem!!! Totally love it!
Sherri-Ellen & BellaDharma of THE Purrfect Pad
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Thank you
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeScKz_da37RKfdDKr4vPOQ
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I checked out your videos…..I have to say I am utterly gobsmacked & impressed…I seriously did not consider you were a man,,,your poetry is so amazing! Not that only women can write amazing poetry….
You have a depth I rarely fidn in male writers’. I hope I do not offend!
Thank you for sharing your poetry with the world!
Sherri-Ellen & **purrss** BellaDharma
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haha no worries my Dad always said i was like woman.
stay safe Karl
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Very good. Simple, and to the point. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you means a lot to me.
check out out my youtube channel
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeScKz_da37RKfdDKr4vPOQ
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Very nice! 🙂
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Thank you Lisa
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Yes, a nice piece…
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Thank you my friend im glad you think so.
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Wow!
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Beautiful piece!
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Thank you it means a lot..
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