Well on re-reading the poem it is obvious you are a man writing about a woman…somehow tho’ your wording sounded so poignant…..poetry crosses all boundaries like music 😉
I checked out your videos…..I have to say I am utterly gobsmacked & impressed…I seriously did not consider you were a man,,,your poetry is so amazing! Not that only women can write amazing poetry….
You have a depth I rarely fidn in male writers’. I hope I do not offend!
Thank you for sharing your poetry with the world!
Sherri-Ellen & **purrss** BellaDharma
Smith Shine Poetry
Eloquent. This poem, if I were to receive it from a man, would likely win me over! ❤
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Thankyou😊 and I’m sure youve recieved many a poem
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I love this. The metaphor is a vivid image!
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A very large poem… in a very small package…
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Thank you, I guess they dont all have to be big to carry meaning.
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Well on re-reading the poem it is obvious you are a man writing about a woman…somehow tho’ your wording sounded so poignant…..poetry crosses all boundaries like music 😉
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Very eloquent poem!!! Totally love it!
Sherri-Ellen & BellaDharma of THE Purrfect Pad
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Thank you
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeScKz_da37RKfdDKr4vPOQ
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I checked out your videos…..I have to say I am utterly gobsmacked & impressed…I seriously did not consider you were a man,,,your poetry is so amazing! Not that only women can write amazing poetry….
You have a depth I rarely fidn in male writers’. I hope I do not offend!
Thank you for sharing your poetry with the world!
Sherri-Ellen & **purrss** BellaDharma
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haha no worries my Dad always said i was like woman.
stay safe Karl
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Very good. Simple, and to the point. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you means a lot to me.
check out out my youtube channel
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeScKz_da37RKfdDKr4vPOQ
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Very nice! 🙂
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Thank you Lisa
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Yes, a nice piece…
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Thank you my friend im glad you think so.
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Wow!
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Beautiful piece!
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Thank you it means a lot..
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