I see she's been crying, I ask, "why so sad"? She looks me square in the eye an says, "love can hurt real bad. He doesnt want me and his has someone, its true, all a couple accumulate can one hard day be gone". I think of her later, what she said of her and him. I wonder of love and how her heart, he did once win
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Smith Shine Poetry 
FYI, did you mean for this line to be different – and his has someone??
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Maybe the problem is he won her heart once. He should have kept winning it day after day.
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you could be right, maybe we all should, wow ,that’s some responsibility thats deep
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So sad but so beautif
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Thanks 😢
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Loving without being loved is a deep pain in the heart. The heart is the one who decides, not the reason. I liked your poem.
Manuel Angel
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Thanks for your comment appreciated. Stay safe
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You are welcome
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