‘Hello’ ‘Hello’… It was good to see them back.
I left apart of me there. Or did I bring something it back?
Lost or found? In the immersion, of 1st, to 6th track.
She said ‘Don’t believe the truth’. I said ‘Definitely’, you said ‘Maybe’.
There was that little look, then it got a bit crazy.
Now I don’t know if we need each other.
But in that bucket hat and them shades. I believe in you brother.
As they all sup, sniff, and bounce, it was all ‘whatever’.
Though I know these feelings, theses words…
Will live for fuckin ever!
And O’ how I wish she was here, to dance and sing a song with me.
But not one from ‘let it be’. Though nonetheless, ‘stand by me’.
Still, then and now…
We see things they’ll never see!
Smith Shine Poetry 
Wow—what a raw and evocative piece! Your writing pulses with emotion, memory, and a vivid sense of presence. I love how you capture fleeting moments and layered feelings, from the subtle glance to the playful chaos of the scene, all while threading music and cultural references seamlessly into the narrative. The way you juggle uncertainty, longing, and camaraderie gives it an immediacy that really draws the reader in. Phrases like “Will live for fuckin ever!” hit with authenticity and energy, while the reflection on absence and shared experiences adds a tender, reflective layer. Truly, it feels like we’re right there with you, witnessing both the noise and the intimate undercurrents of that moment. Beautifully honest and powerfully human.
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